Today, you are going to write about the escape - your characters will take family, animals, seeds and plants onto the pumpkin to escape from the flood.

You need to decide how the problem will be solved - perhaps your characters get word to the mythical creature that there is a place in the mountains where the food is plentiful and the mythical creature leaves the village to go there. Once the mythical creature has left then your characters can return to the land.

Tomorrow will be the final part of your story.

Things to consider:

suitable presentation - would Mrs Minshell and Mr Dale be happy ? :)

full sentences

capital letters and full stops

commas when need for adjectives

an exclamation sentence (beginning with How or What)

conjunctions