Today we would like you to write the next part of your story:

Part 1

You are going to introduce your mythical creature that lives in the mountain - remember that you will use the mythical creature that you chose.

Include lots of detail about your creature:

What colour is he?

What are his claws like?

Does he breath fire?

What are his eyes like?

How fierce is he?

Part 2:

Introduce the problem in the story - your creature is going to be hungry and he gets very sad and angry. He gets so angry that he makes it rain and it doesn't stop. You will need to say how worried the villagers were becoming because of the rain and that they need to plan an escape from the village ( don't say how they escape today).

Things to consider:

suitable presentation - would Mrs Minshell and Mr Dale be happy ? :)

full sentences

capital letters and full stops

commas when need for adjectives

an exclamation sentence ( beginning with How or What)

conjunctions